Revisions on a 421 page book are much less daunting than revisions on a 717 page book. I finished the first pass today, and am mildly whiny about having to go back through it again, but none of it’s really that bad. I expect to turn it in Monday, which will be good. Then I will do two things: start swimming again, and try to catch up on NNWM. For a week. Until the PRETENDER’S CROWN copy edits arrive. *snivels* It is raining. Worse than that, it’s *incredibly* grey and…