Wow! Got the comments letter for OPERATION: CARDINAL just now! Zoomy turn-around time on that, which is *wonderful*. Lots of good questions, lots of things I need to focus on and clarify (I don’t think the synopsis I wrote was very good, to tell the truth. It’ll give me a very general framework to work from, but all the questions it raised for Matrice and Natashya (head editor for the Bombshell line) were extremely good and relevant ones. Well, I’ll get better at synopsizing these, I’m sure. It’s a matter of practice.), and a compliment from Natashya that made me laugh out loud:
“Wow, she
Congrats on EVERYTHING! I thought you looked slimmer last Satrowday when you came to visit your aged but spry parents.