I was just whinging that this was a part of the synopsis where if I could write, “And then something big happens,” it would be much easier. Laura Anne, helpfully, said, “Rocks fall. Everybody dies.”
…which, as it turns out, given the location and scene at hand, is a totally valid plot suggestion. Sometimes this job doesn’t suck. :)
I’m totally going to have to find a picture of that card from the Munchkins card game and post it for you. (If you haven’t played that game you are seriously missing out. Trust me.)
You forgot the last part;
“Rocks fall. Everybody dies. How did it happen?”
Fussy it up a bit and you’ve got a new book. :)