After lots of wrestling with it, I decided to stick with the script I’ve got. I’ve been thinking of doing kind of screen-shots of each page of the script with the corresponding roughs beside it; would people be interested in that? Or is it more fun to try to decide what the story is on your own? :)
I’m interested!
I still love her face and I the action shots are really cool. I don’t need a script, but I’d love to read it anyway. :D