Rough page sketches from Ardian. He said, somewhat apologetically, “These are only roughs, the final pages will be much better.” *snort* I’m sure they will be, but wait til you see them. :)
I _am_ working on a rewrite of the script, but I tell you, I’m at an utter loss as to which will work better. I’ve asked him not to do more than page roughs until I get at least the first five rewritten pages to him (tomorrow, with any luck), and I will also post the rewritten pages and the originals to get feedback. I’ll comment on my thought process when I do that, as well.
Uh. Oh. Right. He also sent the first page in color, essentially as an app for me considering him as the colorist. Comments are welcome, nay, even encouraged!
P.S. I am bewildered at the number of people who wanted *in* on this filter, and the fact that nobody’s asked to be taken *off* of it.